This was a pretty nice module, I think you are getting somewhere with setting a nice, creepy atmosphere. If you need someone to proofread any notes, you could PM me, I'll try to log onto my account every so often, but my e-mail would be better as I check that mostly every day. If you're interested just send me a PM.
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I really thought the monster encounter was good, I actually panicked a little when I tried one wardrobe and it wouldn't open, and the other was blocked off, forcing me to hide in a corner. I thought that was really well done.
I didn't notice any static overlapping like I did in other custom stories, which is nice.
Overall, I say good work, this was a fun module, and creating a good atmosphere and levels comes with practice, and I think you're onto a good start, nice module