Raymond
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RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video]
Nice screenshots .
One World To Another [DEMO] coming soon.
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03-19-2011, 03:37 AM |
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Nye
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RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video]
(03-19-2011, 03:37 AM)Raymond Wrote: Nice screenshots .
Thanks, I've been paying a LOT of attention to detail. Hopefully *fingers crossed*, you shouldn't experience any bugs whatsoever when you play the final release
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03-20-2011, 09:11 PM |
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Leu Radu
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RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video]
You are merciless... and I like it. The Demo was too intense, I didn't not expect such a strong start. It shows your great potential. The mood is set perfectly by that dreadful music at the beginning. I see some good scripting work there. I'm quite curious of what you will conjure up in the final story!
There are some minor details that did not fit (besides the ones already discussed). I was able to see the monster spawn, appearing out of thin air. I believe you intend the player to enter the room, but I lingered outside, curios about the glass bottle and where it came from. Also, in the flooded hall, the water pouring out of the fountain has a sharp angle that looks totally unrealistic.
I believe the story is close to being finished, isn't it? I would gladly offer help in testing it, should you need it.
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03-31-2011, 11:44 PM |
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Nye
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RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video]
(03-31-2011, 11:44 PM)Leu Radu Wrote: You are merciless... and I like it. The Demo was too intense, I didn't not expect such a strong start. It shows your great potential. The mood is set perfectly by that dreadful music at the beginning. I see some good scripting work there. I'm quite curious of what you will conjure up in the final story!
There are some minor details that did not fit (besides the ones already discussed). I was able to see the monster spawn, appearing out of thin air. I believe you intend the player to enter the room, but I lingered outside, curios about the glass bottle and where it came from. Also, in the flooded hall, the water pouring out of the fountain has a sharp angle that looks totally unrealistic.
I believe the story is close to being finished, isn't it? I would gladly offer help in testing it, should you need it.
Thanks for the feedback, I have fixed the monster spawn and the fountain (amongst lots of other things!) I'm still playing around with the idea of having voice acting. Add my MSN: joenye@hotmail.co.uk if you would like to test the final story
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04-01-2011, 05:23 PM |
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Pandemoneus
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RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video]
Tsk tsk, I already told you about the fountain! :>
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04-02-2011, 01:11 AM |
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Nye
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RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video]
(04-02-2011, 01:11 AM)Pandemoneus Wrote: Tsk tsk, I already told you about the fountain! :>
HEY! I fixed the fountain as soon as you told me about it
I haven't updated this demo for over a month
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04-02-2011, 12:05 PM |
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theDARKW0LF
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RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video]
Great custom story, Nye! My only gripe is how many times you forced me to look at something. I'd prefer a little more freedom in that area. Other than that, it was really good!
Check out my custom stories(1)(2)!
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04-05-2011, 10:05 PM |
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KenOfAllTrades
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RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video]
Err... Is it supposed to crash right after you climb the ladder and go into the big hall filled with water? I crash every time I try to open the door
I probably made a LP of this! Youtube channel here!
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04-08-2011, 11:00 AM |
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Cryaotic
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RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video]
(04-08-2011, 11:00 AM)KenOfAllTrades Wrote: Err... Is it supposed to crash right after you climb the ladder and go into the big hall filled with water? I crash every time I try to open the door
Yes it is, that is the end of the demo.
I shall now put on my sunglasses emoticon.
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04-08-2011, 12:57 PM |
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KenOfAllTrades
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RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video]
(04-08-2011, 12:57 PM)Cryaotic Wrote: (04-08-2011, 11:00 AM)KenOfAllTrades Wrote: Err... Is it supposed to crash right after you climb the ladder and go into the big hall filled with water? I crash every time I try to open the door
Yes it is, that is the end of the demo.
I shall now put on my sunglasses emoticon.
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I probably made a LP of this! Youtube channel here!
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04-08-2011, 05:56 PM |
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