New Custom Story: Returning Home

**i3670** · 10-20-2011, 05:02 PM

I've completed my short Custom Story.

Link: http://www.mediafire.com/?td31nsog19nd3mc

Enjoy!

**JohnHawkz** · 10-20-2011, 06:04 PM

I'll record it after my raid Wink

**i3670** · 10-20-2011, 06:24 PM

PM me when it's up on youtube or whatever

**waqas12346** · 10-21-2011, 06:03 PM

The CS was good. Some scary events scared me, You just need to improve your CS. Smile

1- Put name and description of the key(S).
2- Add more scaryness events and sounds.
3- Carpet don't have to be stratch, It looks bad.
4- Add some musics, Nice musics.

Otherwise, I like the CS. It was great. Good luck on your next CS. Smile

I also recorded it. I'll give you the link soon when it will uploaded. Big Grin

Sounds (6/10)
Gameplay (7/10)
Scares (5/10)
Musics (5/10)
Puzzles (4/10)
Maps (8/10)

OVERALL (6/10)

**i3670** · 10-21-2011, 08:35 PM

Thank you for your constructive criticism. I will take it into consideration

**SurvivorsDead** · 10-22-2011, 09:28 AM

that was scary Big Grin

**Dark Knight** · 10-22-2011, 09:09 PM

very good and scary map.

i like that ability to use torch as lantern Tongue

pathnode on monster - seems make that scary elements as is must be

btw, stuck in last room in cellar - there are the alter, and can"t open that door

or this is the end?

**i3670** · 10-22-2011, 10:04 PM

"Removed because of spoiler"

**Dark Knight** · 10-24-2011, 07:49 PM

haha, thanks, i finished it.
final area clearly alludes to the extension, keep up the good work Smile

**i3670** · 10-25-2011, 01:54 PM

I am working on a sequel atm, will take some time though. Got alot of schoolwork atm.