[WIP] The Ghost of Dr. Arachnikara *NEW UPDATE V1.8*

[DaAinGame]

Alright, let me make a suggestion here, this thread doesn't seem to be getting any attention.

I personally think you should save the pictures to Tinypic or Photobucket or some other image hosting site because some people like myself may not want to download a zip file of images just to see what the map looks like. Like I said, upload them to an image hosting site and put them in your first post so people have pictures to go by right when they open the thread as opposed to just a paragraph and download links.

If people see some pics on here, it may encourage people to download and try, but that's just my opinion.

Couldn't agree more. Also, video is another great method at attracting people to your custom story. To be honest, all I see is a blank thread that doesn't really wake me up that much. I'll go ahead and download the map and see how it goes though!

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Spoiler below!

Good:
Plenty of jump scares and builds a good amount of tension.
I noticed nearly zero texture errors
That brute had me frozen in my seat
Amazing lighting, wish it worked that well in my story!
The "invisible" barriers in the Library were pretty neat
Great Ambient Sounding and music
Great for your first story imo
Bad:
Level layout didn't make much sense. From a bedroom into a main dinning hall? Or a dungeon off a library?
Had a hard time finding the East Wing Key. Spent about 10 minutes there
I realize the ending is temporary, but there was no ceiling!!! >=P
A little short, but if it still is in progress, that's okay
Some scares were predictable, but you still caught me by surprise a few times.
Noticed a key that did nothing, and had no name in the bedroom?
Could use some work on the actual Storyline. You have a frame for one, but exploit it and use it to create fear in the player!
The text saying "Use the crowbar on the door" or whatever it was kind of ruins the fun for that. Give a hint about it, but don't just give it away.

Overall I give it a 5/10
Please continue on it! Put enough work into it and it could be great!