Fatal Error when starting my Costum Story

[FragdaddyXXL]

(9,1):ERR : Expected "," or ";"

To read errors like this in the future:
9 is the line the exception occurred,
1 is the place in the line that the exception occurred.

You haven't surrounded your LockedDoor_1 with quotes, as it is a string.
I noticed this in 2 places.

Also, do not change the parameters in the callback functions when you declare them:
void unlock_door(string &in asItem, string &in asEntity)

Also, Key To Hallway needs to be in quotes.