I can't get my script to work D:

[Cruzore]

How exactly do you want him to die? Is it some sort of "You can't get out" kill, a FadeOut one, or a SetPlayerhealth to 0 one? It depends on how you want to have it. Also, it's better when you do it yourself, as that increases your scripting knowledge far better than copying the whole script from others. And if you want your story to be at least intermediate and not shit, you will probably need more than 3 functions and their callbacks, and don't expect anyone to write all that for you, except when you make a whole team, with a scripter, mapper, story writer and such.