my first custom Story: The evil awakes

[WALP]

After seeing your video I think the main problem with your cs was that you did not design it with a player in mind, did you even design it for an audience? no really i think you sub-conciously(gramma guy help me)designed it for yourself or people like you, so if a certain person was not playing it like you, you were playing it wrong, and you cant play a game wrong.
not even amnesia.