New Custom Story

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23 MB zip file for a bunch of screenshots? *grumblegrumble*
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Okay, my download finished, let's give some feedback ^^
Now on most of the screens I could barely see anything because they were so extremely dark. You might want to have at least a faint box light, or, if the pitch black darkness is intentional, brighten the screenshots a little.
But even where I could make something out, your levels still look pretty empty...so there's really not much to give feedback about. (what can you say about the quality of an empty room or a single asset shrouded in darkness? )
I think the screenshot I like the most is the candle-lit staircase. It has a mysterious atmosphere about it...
The library is nice too, but it looks a bit too "uniform" right now, with everything being so perfectly aligned. You might want to add some randomness to the books, hide the tiling texture of the floor with a carpet or something, maybe put some book piles next to the shelves or some candeliers...

(like the pathetic theme "08_amb.ogg")

...umm...I don't think "pathetic" means what you think it means. It's not the correct translation of "pathetisch" (that would be maybe "lofty" or "sublime"), it actually means "erbärmlich". I guess that's why some people here felt offended by your post