Kalma [Demo] - Custom Story

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I highly recommend you keep working with HPL2- you have talent. I was very impressed with some of your environments, and the lobby really did feel like a new environment- I liked the antique wooden lodge feeling it had going on. The only thing I would recommend is make your puzzles less obvious, as that was the weakest area in this demo. I didn't even know why my character would need a

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jar of oil, but as soon as I saw the giant cask of oil, I thought "well, looks like I'm gonna have to grease a lever at some point".

To combat this, I would recommend disabling interaction with

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the drill pieces and the glass jar until the player even tries to move the stuck lever.

Then the player would be forced to backtrack, extending gameplay exponentially. As it is, I merely picked up all the puzzle pieces and went around solving arbitrary puzzles and held onto the results until the items became necessary.

Like I said before, though, the environments you make are excellent! very creative.

Thanks man, i feel honored.