Nightmare While Awake Chapter 1 Demo

[Robby]

Ironman, I hate to break it down to you, but what you're trying to do is NOT good.

Listen. If you want a jumpscare, make it so that it matches with the story of your custom story. Teleporting naked guys are the worst of scares (and that's not me talking).

If you'd listen to what people are talking about, and read their criticisms, you might get an idea about "oh, this is good, let's keep it", and "this is bad, let's change that" is.

In short, TNG's are bad. If you'd change that, the people here might be friendlier. But if you fail to understand, I can't make it more detailed.