[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread

[Kurton]

The scene looks really bare, Kurton, and there should be more contrast, both dark and light, and the presence of other colours would make it look a lot better. Right now, it looks very flat and boring.

Yes, it looks bare. That's part of what the scene is, part of what a deserted place looks like. There's no reason for more color. It's not Mardi Gras.

I'd also say you should have more stuff like larger fallen rocks, hanging ropes. The middle thirds in particular have nothing of note there really, which is a problem. I'm also not sure if you even have a skybox on outside?

There's not much place for rocks to have fallen from, just the broken pillar. Middle thirds of what? There doesn't need to be a skybox, the solitary color suffices to portray the brightness of outside because that window is a minor enough detail that not much attention needs paid to it.

The bottom left looks like it has nothing there but an errant bit of tree, and in the bottom right third, that plank thing sticking out just gets in the way and adds nothing.

I understand this is the screenshot criticism thread, but is it so short-minded of me to think that critiquing the map itself is what's most helpful?