MrBehemoth
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RE: Amnesia: The Streets of London (AMFP assets/Full Conversion).DEMO RELEASED
I'm holding off because I want to play the finished article, but I just wanted to say it's looking great! The set-pieces and carnage outside look like they will help to create an immersive world where things are actually happening - lots more of that please! XD
Also, my advice (to anyone) is to make sure you get all your text proof-read. I haven't seen what the in-game text is like (if there is any) but there are quite a few grammar mistakes on your ModDb page. Also, personally, I feel like "Ever downward..." works better than "Downward ever...", even though it's not technically ungrammatical. I am always happy to proof-read and provide grammar or stylistic advice on your text. Just PM and ask, any time, or tell me to shut up about it. :p
Anyway, good work! Keep it up!
(This post was last modified: 09-04-2014, 09:38 AM by MrBehemoth.)
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09-04-2014, 12:58 AM |
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