[DEMO] Horror story

[DominusVita]

Like you said, very short, but strong scripted events, it's the high point. The ambient sound that keeps playing is very unsettling... nice ending. "End of the demo", right. :p It's the first time I've been scared by dropping a lantern. My advice is try to find a more unique level design out of the template you're using. Coding obviously isn't the problem, try to add in some major scares and more puzzle elements with what you've got, and you'll be set. At least that's my opinion, anyways.