Custom story: [FR] Les chroniques d'Alex / [EN] Alex's chronicles - Part1

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After reading the chaser's post I dont really feel like trying your CS srry.
If there are as many problems as he says, and you are planning to turn this into a series, then It would proberly be a good idea to either fix or remake this CS first. If you want people to play the rest of your series you first chapter is proberly the most important one so even if you have made a 10/10 CS for 5th chapter it wont matter if people have to go through 4 bad Custom stories to reach it.

ups wrong account, sorry people.