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Work in progress Amnesia: Path of Darkness
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RE: Amnesia: Path of Darkness

I lol'ed at "expensive scares". XD

And just a suggestion, there are a few errors with the summary. Here are some
corrections (feel free to ignore this):

Spoiler below!

You are Matthew Mollaneau, a rather eccentric inventor who lives in a castle situated in the heart of a town whose inhabitants are not always known for their kind and courteous natures. As a matter of fact, receiving threatening letters is not terribly uncommon. But, one day, you awaken with most of your memories gone. What has happened to you?

There is a dark secret. Something you have done. And, soon, one way or another, you will discover it. But will you be able to live with the truth?

(Just changed a few things, correcting tiny errors, and changed the last bit of the ending to make it sound a tad more exciting.)


Good luck with your story! Big Grin Looking forward to see what you do with it.

02-13-2015, 12:25 AM
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Amnesia: Path of Darkness - by Silent Darkness - 09-19-2013, 06:40 PM
RE: Amnesia: Path of Darkness - by Mudbill - 02-12-2015, 07:33 PM
RE: Amnesia: Path of Darkness - by AGP - 02-13-2015, 12:25 AM
RE: Amnesia: Path of Darkness - by Slanderous - 02-13-2015, 11:51 PM



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