Home, Sweet home. (Demo out now!) FEEDBACK NEEDED

[machosalad]

Downloading right now...

6.4 Mb in file size, im expecting a big custom story :O

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The story was very good to be your first ever custom story! But you can work a little more on the details; a note on the ground are sometimes easy to miss, you can see through the edges of some walls, missing billboards in the room where the ceiling was broken, and too many tinderboxes.
And adding 2 or more fake monsters after each other makes the player less scared of the monsters thinking they are fake. Like when the brute came, i knew it was fake and ran into it.

The gameplay on the other hand was simple. Maybe too simple. It would be more interesting and entertaining to play if the map included more and different puzzles instead of finding a key to the next door. Or if you want your story to be more of a scary kind, add more monster action! That is, real monster encounters with hiding places, chases and alot of scary sound to bring up the tension.

It would be fun to play it when it's done!