The Forgotten House Ch1 done WIP On ch2 now

[devin413]

Hey Guys this is my 2nd Story it calls The Forgotten House

The Story

at late afternoon you take a walk with your dog but this time you take an new Walk Path after 1 hour you want to go back but you see a house what you never see before and you fill attracted to the house so you walk to it you hear noises suddenly your dog runs away but you dont follow him you want go to the house

the first lvl is a bit tricky becuse i want to build a huge house where are all quests but than i think that it is to big for one level

Hope you like it GL and HF
and nice Scares i wish you ;D

Pls report bugs and leave you mind about it ^^

Chapter One Link

http://www.mediafire.com/?q19x9ma1ub179wf

Finished Project = 50%

Chapter 1 = 100%
Chapter 2 = 15%


I start work on my 2nd Chapter now


////////// 1St Chapter //////////

find some bugs in that level what are now 100%

contains

Intro = 99%
MainHouse = 99%
Cellar = 99%
Cave = 99%
CellarP2 = 99%
OutSide = 100%
ExperimentalDungeon = 100%
Sanctum = 100%

1% for fixes >.>


/////////////////////////


////////// 2nd Chapter //////////


contains


Sanctum = 100% you start at the end of the 1st chapter

servant kitchen = 100%

sewer = 100%

Machine = 30%



Some Screens CH 1

http://www.abload.de/image.php?img=amnes..._178eg.png


http://www.abload.de/image.php?img=amnes..._1j8vr.png


http://www.abload.de/image.php?img=amnes..._7djy5.png


http://www.abload.de/image.php?img=amnes..._1h82r.png


http://www.abload.de/image.php?img=mainhouse_1xu5v.png


Some Screens CH 2


will update later

[Dark Knight]

well then, just played.


bugs:

when i enter to Cellar, game crashes to desktop



and - no, please no monster in closets, no more
nice creepy one

[devin413]

well then, just played.


bugs:

when i enter to Cellar, game crashes to desktop



and - no, please no monster in closets, no more
nice creepy one

man i love bugs that i dont have >.> and thats not a script bug from me

ok i fix it omg i dont know why but it just bugs becuse of the music i install 1.2 than i have that same bug xD

...

[Dark Knight]

deleted map, reinstall again - nothing helps.
yes, i have v 1.2. + last map from Tanshaydar(White night), but i doubt, that his own files conflict with yours,... very strange.

[devin413]

i upload a new map pls download that

http://www.mediafire.com/?b3tsue61vgj5hb9

no the bug was i have the version 1.1 and in version 1.2 the music from my cellar map bugs xD

how's wanna know that xD

[Dark Knight]

hey, i dont know what you to do, but now Cellar -works ok.

Spoiler below!

grab that barrel with water, where i need to use it?

and please update your game to v 1.2.+ update first post (new link)


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hmm, solved.
use barrel on rocks, them blow up, BUT- when i returning from that room, monsters appears, but them cant move and cant even touch me!


+ glitch - flying camera appears(camera very unstable)
seems there are some more works to do that scary map better!
good luck!

[devin413]

pfff wtf so annoying i test it now 2nd time with Version 1.2 and every think is fine no bugs no glitches what i do wrong ?

normali you camera turns to that hole

http://www.mediafire.com/?x9979jcw84b66d3

and you jump in it ...

[masterlinx667]

Awww, I clicked on the link to download it and it says "Invalid or deleted file"

[devin413]

ups i do some fixes an forgott to upload >.> dump

http://www.mediafire.com/?x9979jcw84b66d3

here sry 4 that xD

[keeshond5]

I havent completed it yet and I'm not going to right now.. But I thought I'd share my thoughts.. The house was pretty nicely made from the outside. But the inside of the house was a little weird.. Then when I fell into the cellar it got even weirder.. The rooms didnt make any sense at all and you basicly just copied that level from the original Amnesia (Forgot what it's called). The scares were also really cheap. Even though I usually don't mind, you didn't really have anything to make up for them. No good story.. The level design was not really that good. And the notes contained alot of spelling errors and they didnt even have any punctuation whatsoever!

To sum it up..

The good:
I see some potential!
You scared me a couple of times

The bad:
Bad story (You go into a house because you feel attracted? Thats just an excuse to perform burglary on the owners! lol)
Mediocre level design
Cheap scares (but some did scare me so its a plus aswell)
Work on your grammar!

btw: I might finish this story anyway and maybe it will change my mind, but right now I'm feeling a bit tired.