[ANN] The Reapers Dungeon

[stokesie95]

this is a cs story made by stokes46 and his friend



the story is based where you have woken up in a room forgeting all that has happend a few hours earlier you try and remember and carnt seem know how to get out till it HITS you

this is the first chapter of many we are working on the second as we speak and we hope you like it





download

http://www.mediafire.com/?dn2mitembw021xw

[Obliviator27]

Decided to download and write a "review" of sorts. I'll write my thoughts as I go along.
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Spoiler below!

- Oh my. Large filesize. This should be good.
- Just some grammar errors to point out. Daniel should be capitalized, as well with I.
- This map...it had better not be the way it is because of how I think it's going to be.
- Jump scares, short, simple, effective...against those who fall for them.
- Sudden transition to dungeonbase...kind of strange, but I'll go with it.
- Yes, script, I see the lever and I know I have to pull it.
- Crowbar just sitting in the wall...okay.
- Wooden ladder makes metal sounds.
- I can reopen the hatch behind me and there's just tiles underneath. Just make the hatch static or locked.
- Key remains unnamed.
- I can see stairs clipping through the roof.
- Corpse missed the wardrobe, and clipped through the side of it.
- The stairway almost looks like a total rip of mine...but design is design.
- Walked through the corridor, and saw the door. Need welders on the sides of the doorway, it looks odd.
- Wooden ladder makes metal sounds, again.
- I can see down the wall at the back of your castlebase area, up on top of the "balcony"
- A carry-able torch. Nice touch....can't recall who this belongs to.
- The blue flames that are outside of the stove look a bit odd.
- So much of this points to being what I think it is...but I'll continue.
- Key still lacks a name.
- Oh dear god. It is what I thought it was. *sigh*
- I can't help but notice in the credits that there was no pointer toward the creator of the carry-able torch you had. I know I've seen it on here before, but I can't recall the creator.
- I never had to use the key I found in the furnace.
- This story lacked a story.
- I'm not going to leave an overarching comment for the entire story, because I'll be biased by the Pewdiepie influence.

[rougethekitty]

Thnx! We will try fix these bugs with the crowbar and the ladder.. on Ch 2 we wont make the same mistake again.

[Acies]

It could be the one I made for "Library of alexandria". Could be someone else's. I however do not ask for credit for such things. It's basically a changed .ent file in which I have put no "artistic" work :>

So if it's "mine" --> Free pass. lol.