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		| Romulator   Not Tech Support ;-)
 
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			| RE: Screenshot criticism thread 
 
				Had a go at this. Improvement ideas? (probably some things about decals, lighting and particles) ![[Image: 8PHGg.png]](http://puu.sh/8PHGg.png) 
Full size: http://puu.sh/8PHGg.png
Lol, sorry, I was pretty bored.
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		| PutraenusAlivius   Posting Freak
 
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			| RE: Screenshot criticism thread 
 
				 (05-17-2014, 01:45 PM)Romulator Wrote:  Had a go at this. Improvement ideas? (probably some things about decals, lighting and particles)
 
 ![[Image: 8PHGg.png]](http://puu.sh/8PHGg.png) Full size: http://puu.sh/8PHGg.png
 
 Lol, sorry, I was pretty bored.
 
How in the hell did you make the grunt to lean? Did you steal HPL3's Pose Mode?
			 
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		| Reminiscity   Member
 
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				 (05-17-2014, 03:51 PM)SomethingRidiculous Wrote:  How in the hell did you make the grunt to lean? Did you steal HPL3's Pose Mode? 
Ragdoll model of the grunt I would presume.
			 
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		| Romulator   Not Tech Support ;-)
 
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				 (05-17-2014, 04:36 PM)Reminiscity Wrote:  Ragdoll model of the grunt I would presume. 
Indeed.    
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		| GrAVit   Senior Member
 
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			| RE: Screenshot criticism thread 
 
				 (05-17-2014, 01:45 PM)Romulator Wrote:  Had a go at this. Improvement ideas? (probably some things about decals, lighting and particles)
 
 ![[Image: 8PHGg.png]](http://puu.sh/8PHGg.png) Full size: http://puu.sh/8PHGg.png
 
 Lol, sorry, I was pretty bored.
 
I'd make the body a bit more illuminated. I had a hard time identifying it as the grunt at first.
			 
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		| Streetboat   Posting Freak
 
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			| RE: Screenshot criticism thread 
 
				yo billboards n decals n spotlights n shit! you should get rid of that lantern, put one on the ceiling, straight up put a bright shining light that totally illuminates that motherfucker right there, but MAKE SURE YOU JUXTAPOSE THAT BITCH WITH THE AREA AROUND IT. dark and light, shadows n brightness! make that grunt be the center of attention like the little drama queen he is! put some fly particles maybe, some blood drips around the floor near his wrists (since that's what this picture totally looks like and all) and get some mother 
 flipping
 
 BILLBOARDS
 
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 its gonna look so fly, dude. so fly.
 
 
				
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		| Newsman Waterpaper   Senior Member
 
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		| Skyy   Member
 
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				 (05-18-2014, 08:31 PM)Chieftain1 Wrote:  
Any thoughts? The billboards are too bright.
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		| Wapez   Senior Member
 
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				 (05-18-2014, 08:31 PM)Chieftain1 Wrote:  
Any thoughts? 
Hooolyy shit those billboards are waayy too bright. Lower the brightness!    
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		| Newsman Waterpaper   Senior Member
 
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				 (05-18-2014, 08:58 PM)Wapez Wrote:   (05-18-2014, 08:31 PM)Chieftain1 Wrote:  
Any thoughts? Hooolyy shit those billboards are waayy too bright. Lower the brightness!
  
Better?
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