[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread

[victorkim890(KimmyChimmy)]

the wall with the wondow doesnt match with all the other walls

[CarnivorousJelly]

It's valid to mix and match - but, like mentioned earlier in the thread, the mixing and matching has to be done well.

[FlawlessHappiness]

Oh! Jelly, you forgot to add that theres a random ceiling on the floor. Remove that because we can see directly through it.

[CarnivorousJelly]

I did not D: I just wrote a wall of text that it got buried in :p

• You have a ceiling on the floor (which we can see through). They don't really make that much sense.
  

Though I did forget to mention the stairs leading to nowhere in the corner >.>

[FlawlessHappiness]

I did not D: I just wrote a wall of text that it got buried in :p

• You have a ceiling on the floor (which we can see through). They don't really make that much sense.
  

Though I did forget to mention the stairs leading to nowhere in the corner >.>

Oh then I missed it
Sorry!

Ok, we got the stairs covered too then


But to be honest, it does look like it is mostly different objects thrown into the editor and then thrown in the screenshot criticism for troll and giggles.

[Slanderous]

the wall with the wondow doesnt match with all the other walls

the truth has been spoken.

[RedKnight]

Spoiler below!

Unfinished sewers map, i will add water of course but what should i add more?

[Radical Batz]

Spoiler below!

Unfinished sewers map, i will add water of course but what should i add more?

Maybe a bunch of pipes and some moist on some walls.
You might also add a greenish yellowish fog to make it look more like a dirt sewer!

[CorinthianMerchant]

Spoiler below!

Unfinished sewers map, i will add water of course but what should i add more?

That light doesn't have a source, so I would recommend that you add some lamps.

[RedKnight]

The pointlight was to make the sewers look clearly