Cloud Of confusion v2 (FIXING(First Story))

[Xanthos]

Cloud Of Confusion v2.0

This is my first custom story

Sorry the name in the story says stickman722

That's my youtube account.

I will post the name Xanthos in the title so I don't lose my

Own Credit for the project!

I have been working on this for about 4.5 months and I finally made an account. 200+ downloads

There's not much of a story line besides waking up in a random ass house and being trapped.

You pretty much are trying to escape this house without dying and getting raped by Mr. Face and the Brute, and the Alois, and the water monster. I have made some funny jokes in the story and some jump scares.

The first map is a little glitchy. I need someone to post a comment on how to make a little spoiler lists so I can tell how to get past the annoying puzzles and glitches in the first map.

Here's a little video I put together while testing maps 1-3. (I UPDATED SO THIS DOESN'T GIVE SPOILERS)

NOTE: This requires JUSTINE Expansion.

FOUND AN ERROR DON'T DOWNLOAD v2 YET!!!

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VERSION 1

Spoiler below!

[url]http://www.mediafire.com/?uoccfrpekn72rlk[/url]

VERSION 2

NOT WORKING AT THE MOMENT

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Errors I have noticed

Spoiler below!

I Updated No more !

Please report errors

Spoiler below!

To get past map1 The three knights Hit the middle with a hammer

Below is my map played by others! [CONTAINS SPOILERS]

Spoiler below!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBj8LqgiU3M


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F6MZpN2tu...AAAAAAACAA

[Strembitsky]

You've noticed the errors, so fix them. Don't tell us you have errors!

[Dark Knight]

EXCELLENT story, all i can say!
+ huge areas


but nigatives

Spoiler below!

- too many brutes/grunts , but sometimes map looks like Survival map
- some doors without names
- in part with water- near table i fall through floor derectly on the head of water monster

love atmosphere here in that hall

[drweavil]

Looks cool, downloading now

[Xanthos]

You've noticed the errors, so fix them. Don't tell us you have errors!

Oh I know But I'm too lazy to fix them at the moment. That's why I said I need someone to tell me how to make a spoiler tab

[drweavil]

Im at the room with the 3 knights.. and there is a door to a new level. but its locked .. dont know what to do ??

[Xanthos]

Im at the room with the 3 knights.. and there is a door to a new level. but its locked .. dont know what to do ??

Spoiler below!

Ooh Hit the middle Knight with the hammer.

[drweavil]

Im at the room with the 3 knights.. and there is a door to a new level. but its locked .. dont know what to do ??

Spoiler below!

Ooh Hit the middle Knight with the hammer.

Thank you!

[Xanthos]

Im at the room with the 3 knights.. and there is a door to a new level. but its locked .. dont know what to do ??

Spoiler below!

Ooh Hit the middle Knight with the hammer.

Thank you!

No problem. I hope you enjoy my first map

[Xanthos]

Btw Feel free to post negative comments.

I will read the comments and then correct them in my next story. It helps A LOT
But don't be a troll about it or I'll smash you face with a hammer.