(04-20-2012, 08:18 AM)mrOogadeeboogadee Wrote: Just a quick custom story that I threw together, let me know what you think of it and whether or not I should add any more to it.
Didn't take me very long to make, so I'm not sure what you will think of it, but yeah Enjoy!
Sure thing, just gave it a playthrough. I hope this helps.
Spoiler below!
Testing Session One Start:
1. I would suggest adding blockboxes along the path here so that the player doesn't walk up the trees or fall through the map accidentally.
2. This maze of doors would be really terrifying if you added random banging and screaming sounds to the locked doors. Trust me, it really gets the player's heart racing.
3. After completing the maze of doors, I came to a bridge. Be sure to add blockboxes along the sides so the player can't jump off.
4. Right above the door out of this map, the ceiling is missing.
5. One of the doors to the right of the door leading to the blue bridge is unlocked and allows the player to walk inside the walls or fall off the map.
Reached door, nothing happens when opening. Testing Session One ended. If this assisted you, I'd appreciate a +rep
And to answer your question, yes, you should definitely keep adding on to it.
1. I DID have some there, but I might make it so the trees don't collide :)
2. I'm working on that now! Great idea! :)
3. Yep, they're now in place.
4. Ahhh I didn't even see that! Thank you!
5. That door was there so I could test other things and not have to go through the doors, but I was sure I locked it again, obviously not so thank you for pointing that out :)
6. And I've now added so it says that a key is needed to open the door, so you'll have to find that to take you to the next map.
Thank you a lot for your feedback I really appreciate it! :)
(04-20-2012, 10:23 AM)mrOogadeeboogadee Wrote: Thank you so much for your feedback
1. I DID have some there, but I might make it so the trees don't collide
2. I'm working on that now! Great idea!
3. Yep, they're now in place.
4. Ahhh I didn't even see that! Thank you!
5. That door was there so I could test other things and not have to go through the doors, but I was sure I locked it again, obviously not so thank you for pointing that out
6. And I've now added so it says that a key is needed to open the door, so you'll have to find that to take you to the next map.
Thank you a lot for your feedback I really appreciate it!
No problem, glad it helped. Let me know if you'd like me to test another version, whenever you make it.
I like the"cube" part ( the maze of doors ) and the maze are not bad.
If I must said one bad point: It is the fact that when we arrive in the maze , after crossed the bleu-light bridge , there is no door. Like if we are telleporting in the maze. Hope you understood my english is not very good.
Otherwise this story is cool.Good job.
(This post was last modified: 04-20-2012, 03:54 PM by Dafty.)
(04-20-2012, 03:53 PM)Dafty Wrote: Cool map , not long but pretty cool.
Spoiler below!
I like the"cube" part ( the maze of doors ) and the maze are not bad.
If I must said one bad point: It is the fact that when we arrive in the maze , after crossed the bleu-light bridge , there is no door. Like if we are telleporting in the maze. Hope you understood my english is not very good.
Otherwise this story is cool.Good job.
Ahh thank you I didn't even realise that! Consider it fixed! :)
Honestly.. I was kind of looking better map design and overall creation. But little disappoint here, first map "okay you enter the mystery maze" then door maze begins. Okay if you ever played Nepsis very good custom story.. this is like a copy of that, I don't blame you that you copied or something, but that's almost same idea as nepsis. Okay it was okay, couple nice sound scares and door bangs and monsters too.
Then final map begins, okay basically in my opinion I hate mazes a lot and this one is too little confusing and annoying, couple cheap scares too.
I'm not usually give this bad feedback, but I'm just honesty, but don't worry.. make improves and don't rush maps and you can get better feedback next time I'm just helping you, don't hate me, it's okay story for your first I understand that :3
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