Work in progress Trail of the Monster. (CANCELED)

**Stepper321** · 05-16-2012, 08:22 PM

(05-16-2012, 08:18 PM)darkadders Wrote:
(05-16-2012, 08:13 PM)Datguy5 Wrote:
(05-16-2012, 07:47 PM)darkadders Wrote: such an original story

Well atleast its not one of those wayyy too overused "You wake up in bed and dont remember anything".
i know, but still, its pretty damn far away from a story at all.

I tried to avoid the Wake up and don't remember or don't remember like in Amnesia itself (with the drink). I just tried to make an wake up, after a dream. Then do stuff people actually did in real life then, then the actual story comes. The only thing i announced yet is the door banging and breaking, and finding.

**Mine Turtle** · 05-16-2012, 08:24 PM

(05-16-2012, 08:22 PM)Stepper321 Wrote:
(05-16-2012, 08:18 PM)darkadders Wrote:
(05-16-2012, 08:13 PM)Datguy5 Wrote:
(05-16-2012, 07:47 PM)darkadders Wrote: such an original story

Well atleast its not one of those wayyy too overused "You wake up in bed and dont remember anything".
i know, but still, its pretty damn far away from a story at all.
I tried to avoid the Wake up and don't remember or don't remember like in Amnesia itself (with the drink). I just tried to make an wake up, after a dream. Then do stuff people actually did in real life then, then the actual story comes. The only thing i announced yet is the door banging and breaking, and finding.

aslong as you make a good and creative story with this im fine with this, im just so against "wake up" stories.

**Datguy5** · 05-16-2012, 08:35 PM

(05-16-2012, 08:24 PM)darkadders Wrote:
(05-16-2012, 08:22 PM)Stepper321 Wrote:
(05-16-2012, 08:18 PM)darkadders Wrote:
(05-16-2012, 08:13 PM)Datguy5 Wrote:
(05-16-2012, 07:47 PM)darkadders Wrote: such an original story

Well atleast its not one of those wayyy too overused "You wake up in bed and dont remember anything".
i know, but still, its pretty damn far away from a story at all.
I tried to avoid the Wake up and don't remember or don't remember like in Amnesia itself (with the drink). I just tried to make an wake up, after a dream. Then do stuff people actually did in real life then, then the actual story comes. The only thing i announced yet is the door banging and breaking, and finding.
aslong as you make a good and creative story with this im fine with this, im just so against "wake up" stories.

Well anyways,good luck with the story stepper.And Darkadders,how about my story thats currently WIP.In the beginning you wake up in a cave because the floor collapsed under the guy.

**Mine Turtle** · 05-16-2012, 09:10 PM

(05-16-2012, 08:35 PM)Datguy5 Wrote:
(05-16-2012, 08:24 PM)darkadders Wrote:
(05-16-2012, 08:22 PM)Stepper321 Wrote:
(05-16-2012, 08:18 PM)darkadders Wrote:
(05-16-2012, 08:13 PM)Datguy5 Wrote: Well atleast its not one of those wayyy too overused "You wake up in bed and dont remember anything".
i know, but still, its pretty damn far away from a story at all.
I tried to avoid the Wake up and don't remember or don't remember like in Amnesia itself (with the drink). I just tried to make an wake up, after a dream. Then do stuff people actually did in real life then, then the actual story comes. The only thing i announced yet is the door banging and breaking, and finding.
aslong as you make a good and creative story with this im fine with this, im just so against "wake up" stories.
Well anyways,good luck with the story stepper.And Darkadders,how about my story thats currently WIP.In the beginning you wake up in a cave because the floor collapsed under the guy.

im not gonna judge, but you seem to be one of those who are "for" jumpscares..

**Theforgot3n1** · 05-16-2012, 09:12 PM

By the way, I recommend using more decals, or at least removing some of that empty space in the storage and the castle. It looks unnatural with such a shiny floor and nothing else.

**Adny** · 05-16-2012, 09:18 PM

No welders, very plain looking rooms, can't tell much about the lighting from the pics. Also, why are all the pictures 90% floor?

**Datguy5** · 05-16-2012, 09:31 PM

(05-16-2012, 09:10 PM)darkadders Wrote:
(05-16-2012, 08:35 PM)Datguy5 Wrote:
(05-16-2012, 08:24 PM)darkadders Wrote:
(05-16-2012, 08:22 PM)Stepper321 Wrote:
(05-16-2012, 08:18 PM)darkadders Wrote: i know, but still, its pretty damn far away from a story at all.
I tried to avoid the Wake up and don't remember or don't remember like in Amnesia itself (with the drink). I just tried to make an wake up, after a dream. Then do stuff people actually did in real life then, then the actual story comes. The only thing i announced yet is the door banging and breaking, and finding.
aslong as you make a good and creative story with this im fine with this, im just so against "wake up" stories.
Well anyways,good luck with the story stepper.And Darkadders,how about my story thats currently WIP.In the beginning you wake up in a cave because the floor collapsed under the guy.
im not gonna judge, but you seem to be one of those who are "for" jumpscares..

Noo dont worry i dont make jumpscares anymore Big Grin

just some small ones to keep the heart beating(like exploding pot(s?) and books falling from the shelves,that kind of stuff.

**Theforgot3n1** · 05-16-2012, 10:47 PM

I can't do the F12 thingy to fix pictures. Any way to print the screen while in-game?

**Stepper321** · 05-16-2012, 10:59 PM

(05-16-2012, 10:47 PM)Theforgot3n1 Wrote: I can't do the F12 thingy to fix pictures. Any way to print the screen while in-game?

Yes, download fraps.

**Theforgot3n1** · 05-17-2012, 09:40 AM

(05-16-2012, 10:59 PM)Stepper321 Wrote:
(05-16-2012, 10:47 PM)Theforgot3n1 Wrote: I can't do the F12 thingy to fix pictures. Any way to print the screen while in-game?
Yes, download fraps.

oki, thank you!