Work in progress Burnline 9 C

**GrAVit** · 06-10-2012, 06:54 PM

Your name is James Lloyd, you're a private homicide detective. You take requests from people for cases that are left a little unsolved. One day, you receive an anonymous letter.

"Dear Mr. Lloyd, I have an assignment for you, regarding the missing residents of Burnline 9 C. Unfortunately, I cannot tell you more at this point. Meet me there for your briefing, if you're interested."

It was a wide-spread fact that horrible unsolved murders and kidnappings occured there some years ago. This case could bring back your reputation and wealth, just what you needed for a comeback after some years of inactivity.

You end up at Burnline 9 C, or as they say, the apartment building of hell. The place seems abandoned. You open the front door, revealing a dark hall. Carefully you decide to step in, hearing a click..

Burnline 9 C is a horror-themed custom story for Amnesia: The Dark Descent. It contains partial comical references, and a dark mystery regarding the murders and kidnappings of Burnline 9 C.

The custom story itself isn't very long, and is not supposed to be taken
too seriously. This is also my first custom story that I've made. It was, in the
beginning, a test custom story to practice my skills on, but later I decided to
make it a whole project.

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Spoiler below!

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**MaZiCUT** · 06-10-2012, 07:10 PM

This looks good for a first, i might try this out when i'm done tinkering.

**kartanonperuna** · 06-10-2012, 07:36 PM

(06-10-2012, 06:54 PM)GrAVit Wrote: Burnline 9 C is a horror-themed custom story for Amnesia: The Dark Descent.

Really?

**MaZiCUT** · 06-10-2012, 07:43 PM

(06-10-2012, 07:36 PM)kartanonperuna Wrote:
(06-10-2012, 06:54 PM)GrAVit Wrote: Burnline 9 C is a horror-themed custom story for Amnesia: The Dark Descent.
Really?

Your reply made me laugh for some reason

**SonOfLiberty796** · 06-10-2012, 07:44 PM

(06-10-2012, 07:36 PM)kartanonperuna Wrote:
(06-10-2012, 06:54 PM)GrAVit Wrote: Burnline 9 C is a horror-themed custom story for Amnesia: The Dark Descent.
Really?

*Insert troll face here*

**Bunnypoppop** · 06-10-2012, 08:17 PM

Looks nice Smile

Any date when it will be finished? And do you need a voice actor? :p

**GrAVit** · 06-10-2012, 08:40 PM

(06-10-2012, 08:17 PM)Bunnypoppop Wrote: Looks nice Any date when it will be finished? And do you need a voice actor? :p

During this summer, most likely. We don't need any voice actors, thank you.

**GrAVit** · 06-11-2012, 10:02 PM

I've added an easter egg for people to find, it includes drinking.

**xPICKLEMONSTER** · 06-11-2012, 10:17 PM

(06-11-2012, 10:02 PM)GrAVit Wrote: I've added an easter egg for people to find, it includes drinking.

it is no longer an easter egg. For something to be an easter egg, you cannot announce to the world that you have an easter egg. Now all we know is that there is something to do with drinking in your custom story.

But im still interested in the custom story it just sort of annoyed me ya know?

Its like at the start of a movie and you have no idea what the big evil super villian has planned, and he says the whole thing on camera within the 1st 10 seconds. Kinda spoils it.

**GrAVit** · 06-11-2012, 10:18 PM

(06-11-2012, 10:17 PM)xPICKLEMONSTER Wrote:
(06-11-2012, 10:02 PM)GrAVit Wrote: I've added an easter egg for people to find, it includes drinking.
it is no longer an easter egg. For something to be an easter egg, you cannot announce to the world that you have an easter egg. Now all we know is that there is something to do with drinking in your custom story.

But im still interested in the custom story it just sort of annoyed me ya know?

Its like at the start of a movie and you have no idea what the big evil super villian has planned, and he says the whole thing on camera within the 1st 10 seconds. Kinda spoils it.

It's actually pretty far fetched, if you know what I mean.

I'd actually rather call it a half-secret. In any case, I want people to see it, since it's quite unique.