My first custom story

[klieur]

This is my first custom story (not finished yet )
http://www.mediafire.com/?4q97fii3axoi2ki


I need some feedback for help me continue other maps
For the moment, there is 8 differents maps (and only 2 notes are written )
In this map, You are a policeman and you have to investigate in an strange castle about strange dissapear

some screenshot:

(Sorry for my bad English I'm French )

[jamesclarke555]

Might help if you post a video or some screenshots if you want people to download your CS

[Bunnypoppop]

I will play it for my channel

[MaZiCUT]

The rooms in the screenshots look very empty.

[Mine Turtle]

first of all, id get those empty looking rooms filled with ornaments and decorations. it really helps the environment.

second of all, try not to have repeating textures in roofs, floors etc. try modifying the size of them. it creates the illusion of imperfection.

overall from the groundmapping of screenshot 1 you have a solid build; but try to, as i said, fill it up a bit more; or make it smaller if need be.

id get some welders around the room in the second screenshot, and some "light dust" particle systems on the window(s).



im not playing this CS. its not finished, but i assume youre inspired and enthusiastic about this project, so you decided to release it to (hopefully) get positive feedback.

also try to work a bit more on the story of this CS. its dreadfull playing a CS without a solid story.

good luck further on! ^^

[Adny]

The lighting in the first screen shot looks pretty good, better than a lot of finished "high-quality" mods I've seen. The second screen shot could use some work; the billboards seem too bright and too short (try adjusting the length+alpha levels). Also, the entire room seems too blue for just having that one window.

As for detail, use decals, ornaments and furniture to fill in the gaps. the sky's the limit with that sort of thing, so it should be simple.

[klieur]

ok, thx
I will try to fill all my maps with all that you say