my first custom Story: The evil awakes

[Fishnugget]

The Story its in the Game on German and its my first map

Descritpion on German:
Du bist ein Teenager der durch einen Unfall ins Koma gerät, nun bist du wieder wach und merkst sofort dass etwas ganz und garnicht stimmt. Dein Charakter war in der Vergangenheit zu anderen Menschen gemein und lacht andere aus dehnen etwas passiert dass peinlich sein könnte.
Description on English:
You are a dte rodent by an accident in coma turn out, now are again awake you and notice immediately the fact that somewhat completely and is not correct. Your character was in the past to other humans in common and laughs other one out stretches something happened that be embarrassing could.





Download: http://www.mediafire.com/?jc7iw8crc4qgqbo

[EXAWOLT]

you should post some pictures, i bet many people wont download it if theres no pictures

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you can post anything like a simple corridor from the map, more people will try it out

[Fishnugget]

how to makr screenshot?

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I edit it^^
Now you can see

[EXAWOLT]

Thats very good, im gonna try it out as soon i come home

[Fishnugget]

thx^^

[Zaari]

[CorinthianMerchant]

No english translation? You could have done it then sent it to SUMMER^...

[failedALIAS]

Wow.

You didn't know how to post screenshots until a few minutes ago.
BUT we should totally play your custom story.
DESPITE the fact that you took a picture of both Fluttershy (being in the beginning introduction) AND the player being spammed by monsters, but not just that! You posted the picture of the monster spamming, which leads me to believe that you actually think that the idea of bullshit like that is going to sway people into playing your story, which leads me to believe you haven't the slightest understanding of what people here want. That being the case, you probably didn't make the story to anyone's liking whatsoever.

[Kman]

Wow.

You didn't know how to post screenshots until a few minutes ago.
BUT we should totally play your custom story.
DESPITE the fact that you took a picture of both Fluttershy (being in the beginning introduction) AND the player being spammed by monsters, but not just that! You posted the picture of the monster spamming, which leads me to believe that you actually think that the idea of bullshit like that is going to sway people into playing your story, which leads me to believe you haven't the slightest understanding of what people here want. That being the case, you probably didn't make the story to anyone's liking whatsoever.

Yet for some reason as long as it has screenshots people will treat it like it's a masterpiece. I honestly don't get it, screenshots are made to show you the quality of the map and if it's worth your time, yet it seems like the second someone posts a screenshot people act like it went from being crap to being amazing (even if the screenshots are god awful). It's like if you required someone to prove they're a girl to you by sending you a picture of themselves before they role play with you, and even if they have the most disgusting, ugly face ever it's still ok cause it's a girl.

[Fishnugget]

Hey, its my first map okay....
I dont know how to make the door sound
I have many fun with the mapwhen i edit it

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wait, i dont understand all of this, im german xD
Ok its this map
Good?
Not Bad?
Medium?
Bad?
Very Bad?