[WIP] [CS] The Otherworld

[The chaser]

Okay, Level making is ON-FIRE. Tweaking first levels and working on

Spoiler below!

The world of madness:

I have no idea in why the screenies have a so bad quality. I apologize for that

Download FRAPs and take screenshots in TGA format, then use GIMP or Photoshop to convert them, you'll get some nice clean looking screenies.

Got that from palistov.

EDIT : What do you mean by expert mappers ?

Well, I just need advice. Mapping isn't my strong muscle :p

Thanks for that tip. I will re-upload them with a better looking.

[No Author]

Well, I just need advice. Mapping isn't my strong muscle :p

Same here. Still learning.

[The chaser]

Images re-uploaded! As hardarm told me, I'll improve lighting.

Spoiler below!

[No Author]

Images re-uploaded! As hardarm told me, I'll improve lighting.

Spoiler below!

Put some welder at the corner of the wall. That will make a better map.

[CranstonofBoston]

Wow these screenshots are amazing! I've never even thought to make anything like this, the twisted future. Very vapourwave! Any of you guys seen Lorna's Silence? Thinking about watching it.

[No Author]

How's the story been going ?

[The chaser]

Is going really well: I'm tweaking the first levels noob-maded by me, and I'm making the latest ones.

Note that it's divided in chapters: The first one is introduction and story-immersing, the second one is the "a lot of stuff that happens cuz of you".

It isn't really "Twisted future"... you will see, the idea is quite different. Thanks anyways

[The chaser]

More screenshots!
I'm mainly working in the level making, the scripting isn't much far

[Rapture]

In general all 3 pictures are very bland...

(1) The lighting in the middle should be have "Shadows" on. You need dirt smudge decals around the statues and their needs to be more props around the place.

Also your billboards are clipping through the broken pillar.

(2) IMO just bad, I can help with your outside terrain. PM me if you accept.

But to critique it, their is no grass, dirt mounds to give ground variation, bushes and dead bushes. The hills/mountains should not be so stretched near the player, but should increase in size as the distance goes. (So 1x1x1 - 2x2x2 near the player, but gets bigger so the stretched texture isn't as obvious.)

For your message, you should have something better to show off for "It looks abandoned". All I see is just some random debris strewn around.

And make sure you randomly rotate/scale your Trees/Grass/Bushes by 0.1-0.2 in the X/Y/Z.

(3) Hmm ok I guess, I like it being tall but it's bland. Need Castle ceiling welder, flags, paintings, etc...

[The chaser]

In general all 3 pictures are very bland...

(1) The lighting in the middle should be have "Shadows" on. You need dirt smudge decals around the statues and their needs to be more props around the place.

Also your billboards are clipping through the broken pillar.

(2) IMO just bad, I can help with your outside terrain. PM me if you accept.

But to critique it, their is no grass, dirt mounds to give ground variation, bushes and dead bushes. The hills/mountains should not be so stretched near the player, but should increase in size as the distance goes. (So 1x1x1 - 2x2x2 near the player, but gets bigger so the stretched texture isn't as obvious.)

For your message, you should have something better to show off for "It looks abandoned". All I see is just some random debris strewn around.

And make sure you randomly rotate/scale your Trees/Grass/Bushes by 0.1-0.2 in the X/Y/Z.

(3) Hmm ok I guess, I like it being tall but it's bland. Need Castle ceiling welder, flags, paintings, etc...

Mapping isn't my strong muscle, so thanks for the reply I'll try to improve those things you say