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		| lllDash   Member
 
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			| RE: Key to Freedom 
 
				 (10-31-2012, 11:13 PM)Alex Ros Wrote:  The only thing that I can criticize objectively at the moment, just after looking throughout screenshots and teaser, are the natural lights mis-directioning. For example on this particular screenshot http://img818.imageshack.us/img818/851/s...hot007.jpg the light rays are shining with a different angles, which is not right. It's appears to be like you do have multiple moons outside the interior, shining from different directions.
 Everything else looks very accurately made, so objectively nothing to criticize.
 Thanks for the critique. No seriously, it helps me improve my maps. However, in this case, due to the angle and forced perspective of this image, each moon ray may seem inconsistent, but all of them have been duplicated without being individually modified, all are at a 45 degree angle. Thanks for all the positive feedback    
Again; Criticism is helpful.
			 
				
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		| Alex Ros   Senior Member
 
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			| RE: Key to Freedom 
 
				Quote:Thanks for the critique. No seriously, it helps me improve my maps.  
I know )) I've been modding for nearly 4 years (not Amnesia) and normal critique is truly the only thing that is really helpful. Anyway, right now I'm digging into Amnesia Editor myself for... oh yeah, already for 3 hours... so I think some day soon I might ask you for some critiques for my own Amnesia CS try-outs ))))))
 
And - good luck!
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		| lllDash   Member
 
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			| RE: Key to Freedom 
 
				Ok, I've uploaded it to Rapidshare and Gamefront. let me know if you guys experience any problems ^_^Check the first post for the link
 
				
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		| lllDash   Member
 
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			| RE: Key to Freedom 0.9 (testers needed) 
 
				Also, When this CS is done, how do I move this thread from "Custom Stories, TCs & Mods - Development" to "Custom Stories, TCs & Mods"? Or should I just make a new one in Custom Stories, TCs & Mods? Or does something like this stay in "Development"?
			 
 
				
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		| Statyk   Schrödinger's Mod
 
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			| RE: Key to Freedom 0.9 (testers needed) 
 
				Just make a new thread in the Showcase section
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		| CorinthianMerchant   Posting Freak
 
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			| RE: Key to Freedom 0.9 (testers needed) 
 
				Some of these screens look really good, keep up the good work!
			 
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		| Alex Ros   Senior Member
 
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			| RE: Key to Freedom 0.9 (testers needed) 
 
				Well. The very beginning. I broke up window glass with a box, got inside... what's next? Door is closed. No clues at all, no mementos, only a bag, wooden box and planks... it's kinda confusing.
			 
				
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		| HumiliatioN   Posting Freak
 
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			| RE: Key to Freedom 0.9 (testers needed) 
 
				Wow, I tried it and it was fantastic really decent mapping and some new things what I have not seened before or ever. 
Excellent story so far and terrifying as hell!   
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		| Alex Ros   Senior Member
 
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			| RE: Key to Freedom 0.9 (testers needed) 
 
				Humiliation, how u got into the mansion? Broke the windows and... and what? How u opened the door?
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		| lllDash   Member
 
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			| RE: Key to Freedom 0.9 (testers needed) 
 
				 (11-03-2012, 02:13 AM)Alex Ros Wrote:  Humiliation, how u got into the mansion? Broke the windows and... and what? How u opened the door? Check the pipe.    
  (11-02-2012, 10:22 PM)HumiliatioN Wrote:  Wow, I tried it and it was fantastic really decent mapping and some new things what I have not seened before or ever.
 
 Excellent story so far and terrifying as hell!
  That has never happened    .You've only been through 20% of the CS, However there has been cases of other CS crashing randomly and usually some of these fixes include: 
Reinstall CS 
ReinstallAmnesia 
Redownload CS 
Delete saves and start over etc...
 
R U using Amnesia patch 1.2? (AKA Justine patch?)
			 
 
				
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