The story of prisoner 527 (prison escape)- Screenshot added

**prisoner527** · 04-09-2013, 03:41 PM

I am prisoner 527, I dont know my real name, or the name of any relatives. Im a prisoner in Alcatraz, and like many of the other prisoners I have murdered someone. I don't remember exactly what happend or who it was, though I think my girlfriend was cheating on me, and I found him in my house. From what the guards have told my I just walked straight up to him and blew his head of.

But this night, the alarm went of and everyone started to scream in panic. I walked to my door but I tripped on something and hit my head in the door.
A couple of hours later I wake up, its dark, only a few lamps is lighting up the prison block, the door is open and I see my chans to escape, but not before I find out the truth about my past. And what I thought would be a easy escape, got a lot harder when I realised there was something lurking im the darkness.

- Custom lantern
- Custom monsters
- story set in 1963 the same year as Alcatraz closed
- Terrifying atmosphere
-No cheap jumpscares
- Deep story

Screenshots:

Spoiler below!

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**kartanonperuna** · 04-09-2013, 06:19 PM

Interesting.

**OriginalUsername** · 04-09-2013, 06:48 PM

Why is everyone making new accounts to match their stories? I've seen this before, and I don't understand.. I don't think it adds anything to the story, and it'll only create confusion..

**Traggey** · 04-09-2013, 07:28 PM

1963... William Hartnell anyone?

**prisoner527** · 04-09-2013, 07:48 PM

(04-09-2013, 06:48 PM)Smoke Wrote: Why is everyone making new accounts to match their stories? I've seen this before, and I don't understand.. I don't think it adds anything to the story, and it'll only create confusion..

The name I always uses on forums etc. Was already taken and I couldn't come up with a better :p

(04-09-2013, 07:28 PM)Traggey Wrote: 1963... William Hartnell anyone?

What? :p

**OriginalUsername** · 04-09-2013, 09:28 PM

I honestly think you are turtlesiscoolokey, because you two are the only two people on the forum who say 'screenshoots' instead of 'screenshots'. I'm not sure though, so I could be wrong, but it's just something I noticed

Edit: Same with grissinis. Again, I'm not sure, it's just a thought.

**Brosive** · 04-10-2013, 01:13 AM

(04-09-2013, 09:28 PM)Smoke Wrote: I honestly think you are turtlesiscoolokey, because you two are the only two people on the forum who say 'screenshoots' instead of 'screenshots'. I'm not sure though, so I could be wrong, but it's just something I noticed

Edit: Same with grissinis. Again, I'm not sure, it's just a thought.

Don't forget about mrsomeepicrandomguy and Yoilickturtles.

**Daemian** · 04-10-2013, 01:20 AM

instead of
I walked to my door but I tripped on something and hit my head on the door.

why don't you say, for example
Suddenly something huge came from behind. Its gruesome shadow eclipsed mine and a single blow was enough for it to send me way and turn my lights off.

what you say?

**prisoner527** · 04-10-2013, 05:17 AM

The first time you make a post on a forum everybode just comes and to all this... I thought everyone in this forum was nice, but i was wrong... I dont want to finish this after these...

(04-09-2013, 09:28 PM)Smoke Wrote: I honestly think you are turtlesiscoolokey, because you two are the only two people on the forum who say 'screenshoots' instead of 'screenshots'. I'm not sure though, so I could be wrong, but it's just something I noticed

Edit: Same with grissinis. Again, I'm not sure, it's just a thought.

And who dafuck are those guys? :p

(04-10-2013, 01:13 AM)Brosive Wrote:
(04-09-2013, 09:28 PM)Smoke Wrote: I honestly think you are turtlesiscoolokey, because you two are the only two people on the forum who say 'screenshoots' instead of 'screenshots'. I'm not sure though, so I could be wrong, but it's just something I noticed

Edit: Same with grissinis. Again, I'm not sure, it's just a thought.

Don't forget about mrsomeepicrandomguy and Yoilickturtles.

Im not them, I promise, I dnt know who they are

(04-10-2013, 01:20 AM)Amn Wrote: instead of
I walked to my door but I tripped on something and hit my head on the door.

why don't you say, for example
Suddenly something huge came from behind. Its gruesome shadow eclipsed mine and a single blow was enough for it to send me way and turn my lights off.

what you say?

Sounds cool, going to look it over

**Statyk** · 04-10-2013, 05:29 AM

(04-10-2013, 05:17 AM)prisoner527 Wrote: The first time you make a post on a forum everybode just comes and to all this... I thought everyone in this forum was nice, but i was wrong... I dont want to finish this after these...

Who said anything bad about your story or you? No one said anything directly rude... All I see is people correcting some spelling errors in your description, which is fair, in my opinion. Spelling errors can deter focus on what a person is reading.

No reason to assume everyone is not nice for no reason..