(05-03-2013, 09:13 AM)Kman Wrote: Mkay I read it, I can tell you put a ton of work into cause goddamn some of the language you used in it was well thought out. You definitely are able to create a really tense and creepy atmosphere, but it felt a lot like it was building up to what ended up being a rather anti-climactic end.
It's gonna be part of a series, so that anti-climactic feeling can be taken as foreshadowing.
I hope I'll be able to do some editing on the CreepyPasta website after it's published, since the version I submitted to CreepyPasta was an abridged version of the original, which needs some changes.
It must suck being the owner of the CreepyPasta website, reading all those crappy submissions must get old.
(This post was last modified: 05-03-2013, 01:10 PM by failedALIAS.)
(05-03-2013, 09:13 AM)Kman Wrote: Mkay I read it, I can tell you put a ton of work into cause goddamn some of the language you used in it was well thought out. You definitely are able to create a really tense and creepy atmosphere, but it felt a lot like it was building up to what ended up being a rather anti-climactic end.
It's gonna be part of a series, so that anti-climactic feeling can be taken as foreshadowing.
I hope I'll be able to do some editing on the CreepyPasta website after it's published, since the version I submitted to CreepyPasta was an abridged version of the original, which needs some changes.
It must suck being the owner of the CreepyPasta website, reading all those crappy submissions must get old.
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