Thanks for posting your lang. I went through and edited the problems you didn't seem to find using the lang editor tool. There are no longer any errors in the following script, so please replace what you have with what I've posted and test it out. If it doesn't work, then the problem is elsewhere.
ALSO: After you've replaced your lang with what I've given you, if the game still crashes, please re-post the hpl log from Documents/Amnesia/YOUR MOD NAME HERE.
<LANGUAGE>
<RESOURCES>
<Directory Path="/fonts" />
<Directory Path="/lang/english" />
</RESOURCES>
<CATEGORY Name="Journal">
<Entry Name="Diary_Council_SD_Name">Council Letter (Screw Driver)</Entry>
<Entry Name="Diary_Council_SD_Text"> [council_sd.ogg] [br]Dear Dr. Poo,[br][br]My name is Judge Phil and I have been notified of an illegal item in your possession. According to our agreement you can live temporarily on this planet only if you are allowed the land that you build your house on and if you report ALL personal items.[br][br]We are forced to keep your 'screw driver' until futher meetings are held.[br][br]Yours faithfuly,[br]Judge Phil McCaww</Entry>
</CATEGORY>
<CATEGORY Name="Dialogue">
<Entry Name="DP_Wake_1">Morning already?</Entry>
<Entry Name="DP_Wake_2">You know what I need? A good cuppa tea.</Entry>
<Entry Name="DP_Wake_3">Oh The fire's lit. Now isn't that cosy?</Entry>
</CATEGORY>
<CATEGORY Name="PreMenu">
<Entry Name="GammaMsg">This game should be played in the proper Amnesia setting. Set the gamma so that the right square is barely visible to not be in the 'dark' while playing.</Entry>
<Entry Name="SanityMsg">Don't stare at enemies too long! The doctor is easily bored and may dose off while some monstrosity mauls him.</Entry>
<Entry Name="VillMsg">One last thing, villagers don't take too kindly to hooligans. Behave yourself![br][br]-C.M</Entry>
</CATEGORY>
<CATEGORY Name="Ending">
<Entry Name="MainCredits">- AN A.M PRODUCTION -[br][br][br]- DOCTOR POO: NEO -[br][br][br]Developed by Aidan Maxwell (TheDoctorPoo)</Entry>
</CATEGORY>
<CATEGORY Name="Loading">
<Entry Name="LoadScreenMain">Processing...</Entry>
</CATEGORY>
</LANGUAGE>