Fear of the Dark (Preview and work in progress)

[Dismortal]

First, let me say that my english is not perfect. Excuse me if the grammar is wrong. If you find a mistak, feel free to correct me. But please, use an pm.

This is my idea for my custom story with the titel "Fear of the Dark"

Story

Welcome curious mortals to castle Dragonstone. We hope you enjoy your ... special holiday.
"This was the headline of an advertisement in my mailbox."

Are you interested in ancient castles, ghosts, occultism, history and horror?
Are you sick and tired of your last holiday on the beach?

Come and visit castle Dragonstone. We give you the possibility to act out
your interest in parapsychology, ghosts, horror and paranormal activity.
You can take a tour through the castle and study the history from the
middelage to the second world war. Maybe you find more as you wanted.
We die to meet you.

"It should be a special holiday for you. But this weekend in a haunted castle
became into a nightmare as you recognized that something keeps you imprisoned
inside the castle. It pursues you in your nightmares, it scratches on your door and
does not release you again. Find the answers an learn more over the dark history
as you ever wanted. Find a way out of this nightmare."

I´am far away from a release but i have a little pic for you

[Evil Ash]

Nice screenshot. Love the design. Story is a bit lacking but hey, to a good start.

[Dismortal]

Thank you. I know the story introduction doesnt sweep somebody off their feet, but i will build it up. For me, its simple to build up the story in my mother tongue. But not quite so easy to translate it.

But dont think, this is all and the primary quest is to run through the castle until the end. I have something more up one's sleeve

[harlequ1n]

I have a constant fear that someone's always near.

[Dismortal]

Two new preview pics

http://img412.imageshack.us/i/62268349.jpg

http://img4.imageshack.us/i/74872243.jpg

Working progress:
Level decals, scripting, events, testing.

[Stangi]

I have a constant fear that someone's always near.

Good one

Looking forward to it