The Unfortunate Event BETA V 1.02 (UPDATE 5JAN 2011)

[Ichimaruu]

Constructive criticism huh, you mean say the exact same thing I said, except sugar coat it so that lonewolf doesn't cry because my feedback

No, that's not quite what constructive criticism means, but whatever.

[Sel]

Constructive criticism huh, you mean say the exact same thing I said, except sugar coat it so that lonewolf doesn't cry because my feedback

No, that's not quite what constructive criticism means, but whatever.

Clearly you're an expert, since all you've done this entire time is sit in here calling me a troll :)

[Ichimaruu]

Constructive criticism huh, you mean say the exact same thing I said, except sugar coat it so that lonewolf doesn't cry because my feedback

No, that's not quite what constructive criticism means, but whatever.

Clearly you're an expert, since all you've done this entire time is sit in here calling me a troll

I'm just correcting your mistakes that's all, I wouldn't have replied if you'd just accept that you were.

Edit: Oh yeah this is getting off topic, lol

[LoneWolf]

Less arguing more feedback on my story ....... well half my story

[Ivan4ik]

I can not mix the 4 bottles. All five valves are turned, but the bank can not take it.