Super Alpha! in other words not even a demo :P

[Danny Boy]

Ok boys and girls this my first alpha! there are places still unfinished and some stuff its not even well written! but i wanted to shere whit you guys my first custom story! Amnesia: Fading Memories.

please download it to give you oppinion on how do you think it looks
and please comment for me to know what i could better!

enjoy!

[Doctorcheese]

I'll have a look at it tonight, will post right after I've played it!

[Danny Boy]

well its only a five minuts alpha so there is'n much to see i just wanted to post it to see how to post something downloadable in the forum so i might well show what i am starting to do

[Doctorcheese]

I played through it. It was quite enjoyable but there were a few minor changes that i would like to see.

First let me start with pros and cons.

Pros: Good atmosphere, nice scares, nice story.

Cons: The big scares come way too early (like the monster for an example), needs more variety! Like all those boxes in the, what i assumed was, a storage? Also you should add more details.
Last but not least, the light billboards coming out of the windows need to look more natural. They look so flat against the window! Also check the spelling in the notes.

Overall experience was good though, fix those details and it will be a blast!

Its better than most alphas though!

[Danny Boy]

thank you very much

but about the monster i wnated it right at the biggining to make the player more warned about whats happaning in the house, but don't worry i'm not going to make monsters jump out form every were.
and aslo because i like to make monsters in the momonts we less expect

but there are some bugs whit the first monster that i must care off first... you can se the bugs yourself! wend the destroys the door don't hide from him let him know you are there... then wend he falows you hide as if you are playing normaly... then see what happens

[Dark Knight]

HEHE, seems that grunt dissapears only after i unlock the corridor door with the key
if not, he"s undying
btw, maybe need to place lamp in the first room ?
nice work, awaiting for Full !

[Danny Boy]

thanks for testing its and no, no lamp at the beginning, because i want the player not to get all confident at the start... that would ruin the atmosphere :/ the lamp in final version will actualy just appear way after this part.

the final version its still on the making... maybe in the Easter holiday its completed but i don't realy don't want to give a date because i realy want to make a good story and some good and unexpected scares

[Need4Power]

I must say..,very impressive
You really did good work ^^

[Danny Boy]

Thank you very much ^-^

and it will be much better wend done...and wend it haves the new monsters

[Need4Power]

New monsters?!
can't wait