Forsaken (Demo) Teaser and Pictures.

[Castlevalley]

Forsaken is a Custom Story I am currently developing.
I don't normally like to release demos, but I decided to release the demo anyways, because this will help me know what the player likes and hates about the custom story, thus making me able to correct my mistakes and make improvements before the full release.

- You work as a Maintenance Manager and Safety Overseer in a factory located in France, you make sure everything in the factory is maintained and that everyone is safe. Yesterday you decided that you would take the night shift along some others because your daughters birthday is coming and you are almost penniless. During the night you accidentally fell asleep, and now because of some noises in the factory you are waking up. -


Teaser Video
I'd like to thank my friend, who shall remain nameless by request, for the video! (Except his YT account of course..)

Pictures

Spoiler below!

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Please post any suggestions you may have!
And also, please report any bugs!

criticism is welcome!

Legacy - An Unwanted Heritage". (Test it if you want to help me!)

[WALP]

I think you should leave the parts about you working on another full-conversion out of this thread, and just focus on the custom story its dedicated to.
Reading about how you're doing multiple projects and talking about how you just wanna know if its worth it does not exactly make people excited to play your Custom story.
If you really wish to include these things then you should at least put them at the bottom of the thread so the story comes first. Regardless I will give it a play.

[Castlevalley]

I think you should leave the parts about you working on another full-conversion out of this thread, and just focus on the custom story its dedicated to.
Reading about how you're doing multiple projects and talking about how you just wanna know if its worth it does not exactly make people excited to play your Custom story.
If you really wish to include these things then you should at least put them at the bottom of the thread so the story comes first. Regardless I will give it a play.

Good point, I'll remove what I said about my FC and place a tiny link to my FC at the end of my post, thus making it a bit harder to see, but not invisible. I hope you enjoy Forsaken!

[HumiliatioN]

Absolutely one of the best demos I played recently, new mapping design, atmosphere was one of the disturbing playing experiences I ever had!

Everything was just perfect, maybe little dark enviroment sometimes, but I managed to complete whole demo. Great work, sir!

[Castlevalley]

Absolutely one of the best demos I played recently, new mapping design, atmosphere was one of the disturbing playing experiences I ever had!

Everything was just perfect, maybe little dark enviroment sometimes, but I managed to complete whole demo. Great work, sir!

Thank you!

I'm having a lot of fun making this custom story.
I'm also trying to make the atmosphere perfect, as well as making jump scares which aren't exaggerated but actually makes sense.

- Castlevalley

[Nyuu]

Nice map, but it misses a lot of feeling. It's like playing through a bunch of rooms with scares and monsters. It needs more meaning. More puzzles and more story.