My new custom story - The Visitor

**DRedshot** · 07-09-2011, 11:41 PM

I have released my second custom story called 'The Visitor'

I have focused a lot on the lighting and overall atmosphere, as well as puzzles. The map will contain some scares, but this wasn't my main focus. I've spent a lot of time making this (couple of months) and i hope you like the look of it!

hope you like it!

note - you will need justine to play it, also it uses a couple of custom entities, so feel free to use them in your own story.

Download Link:

http://www.mediafire.com/?5dx2ptyzsu6hksr

**Kurton** · 07-10-2011, 01:11 AM

The billboards in the first shot should be more transparent, they're too bright for that dark, eerie environment.

I like the fourth pic best, it feels the most cold and lonely.

**Tenno** · 07-10-2011, 02:56 AM

Screens look good, waiting for a release Tongue

**DRedshot** · 07-10-2011, 03:08 AM

it should be done soon, mainly scripting left to do, also, thanks Kurton for that tip, that room looks much better!

**skypeskype** · 07-10-2011, 09:03 AM

Awsome pics. The level design seems to be very good ! Can't wait to play this one Smile

**DRedshot** · 07-20-2011, 04:03 PM

It's been released now Smile

hope you enjoy it!

by the way, sorry for the inconvenience to everyone who has downloaded it so far, but you will run nto a slight problem later in the game. I've patched it now so you can redownload it. If you can't be bothered here is the solution (partly):

Spoiler below!

**HumiliatioN** · 07-20-2011, 05:33 PM

(07-20-2011, 04:03 PM)DRedshot Wrote: It's been released now hope you enjoy it!
by the way, sorry for the inconvenience to everyone who has downloaded it so far, but you will run nto a slight problem later in the game. I've patched it now so you can redownload it. If you can't be bothered here is the solution (partly):

Spoiler below!

the 'mechanism' in the corridor has been scripted slightly wrong, so basically its back to front. lever 1 = lever 6, lever 6 = lever 1 etc... to solve it just work out the solution as normal, but enter it back to front... Sorry about that

Hey, I played and its Amazing story so far. So many puzzles and stuff.

But one problem:

Spoiler below!

**DRedshot** · 07-20-2011, 05:41 PM

(07-20-2011, 05:33 PM)HumiliatioN Wrote:
(07-20-2011, 04:03 PM)DRedshot Wrote: It's been released now hope you enjoy it!
by the way, sorry for the inconvenience to everyone who has downloaded it so far, but you will run nto a slight problem later in the game. I've patched it now so you can redownload it. If you can't be bothered here is the solution (partly):

Spoiler below!

the 'mechanism' in the corridor has been scripted slightly wrong, so basically its back to front. lever 1 = lever 6, lever 6 = lever 1 etc... to solve it just work out the solution as normal, but enter it back to front... Sorry about that

Hey, I played and its Amazing story so far. So many puzzles and stuff.

But one problem:

Spoiler below!

I have now two chemical bottles from cellar and I have used from that bucket one of them chemicals, but I have now Empty bucket, and one chemical left what I supposed to do now?

When I was in the cellar, and have that crowbar and going upstairs used crowbar that broken lock door then Monster was chasing me and I died. before this "I heard explosion and one of the hallway collapses with rocks. and now I spawned from the cellar start, I can't go anymore that underground the cellar I think i need to use that bucket to extinguish that bonfire one of the rooms. But I can't go there? Please tell me what I do now?

Iteas at the moment: Bucket empty, Two hammers, that one chemical bottle and 3 lanterns xD Maybe bug or something

hmm very strange lol, I think you might have script debug on, that would explain all of the lanterns, also do you have 30+ tinderboxes?

Spoiler below!

**HumiliatioN** · 07-20-2011, 05:44 PM

(07-20-2011, 05:41 PM)DRedshot Wrote:
(07-20-2011, 05:33 PM)HumiliatioN Wrote:
(07-20-2011, 04:03 PM)DRedshot Wrote: It's been released now hope you enjoy it!
by the way, sorry for the inconvenience to everyone who has downloaded it so far, but you will run nto a slight problem later in the game. I've patched it now so you can redownload it. If you can't be bothered here is the solution (partly):

Spoiler below!

the 'mechanism' in the corridor has been scripted slightly wrong, so basically its back to front. lever 1 = lever 6, lever 6 = lever 1 etc... to solve it just work out the solution as normal, but enter it back to front... Sorry about that

Hey, I played and its Amazing story so far. So many puzzles and stuff.

But one problem:

Spoiler below!

I have now two chemical bottles from cellar and I have used from that bucket one of them chemicals, but I have now Empty bucket, and one chemical left what I supposed to do now?

When I was in the cellar, and have that crowbar and going upstairs used crowbar that broken lock door then Monster was chasing me and I died. before this "I heard explosion and one of the hallway collapses with rocks. and now I spawned from the cellar start, I can't go anymore that underground the cellar I think i need to use that bucket to extinguish that bonfire one of the rooms. But I can't go there? Please tell me what I do now?

Iteas at the moment: Bucket empty, Two hammers, that one chemical bottle and 3 lanterns xD Maybe bug or something

hmm very strange lol, I think you might have script debug on, that would explain all of the lanterns, also do you have 30+ tinderboxes?

Spoiler below!

That problem with the extra chemical is a bug, you should only have one chemical after using the water (complete mixture) and the bucket is not needed to extinguish the fire, I was going to use the bucket but unfortunately i decided not to. Also, try loading, it autosaves quite often but i still havent got the hang of checkpoints, so i haven't used those. sorry about that

Okay tell me now some little tip what i need to do now?

**DRedshot** · 07-20-2011, 05:55 PM

ok ill tell you what to do, since youre stuck Wink

Spoiler below!