My new custom story - The Visitor

**TheDavenia** · 07-25-2011, 10:27 PM

Id say nice by looking at the pictures i hope somebody makes a video of it later on

**DRedshot** · 07-25-2011, 10:32 PM

thanks, i'd also like to see someones reaction to it, just to see how scary / fun people actually find it.

**Guanjyn** · 07-26-2011, 03:03 AM

Thanks for the help man. Just finished it. Thought it was really good, but the ending felt a bit like it's an unfinished story.

**DRedshot** · 07-26-2011, 10:14 AM

yeah glad you liked it, and i'm sorry that the ending disappointed you. I'm surprised that you're the only person to mention that, but you're right. I put loads of efforet into it at first, but then i started gettig bored. Unfortunately I won't be finishing it, but I'm making a new story which i will definately finish.

**Guanjyn** · 07-26-2011, 10:54 AM

Ah cool man, sorry if my post came off hard hitting lol. I'll watch out for your next one Smile

**Dizturbed** · 07-31-2011, 05:25 AM

My picture on desc.. o.o

**DRedshot** · 07-31-2011, 09:21 PM

what do you mean? I haven't even put an image in my custom_story_settings.cfg haha. maybe it's glitched, but i assure you i haven't stolen you're picture! ps: what custom story is the picture from? because sometimes if i click on another cs, then click mine, the other picture loads... Strange..

**Dizturbed** · 07-31-2011, 09:39 PM

ooooh, ok :L hahaha, sorry :p

**Stanton** · 08-03-2011, 01:55 PM

it was too short with no ending. I enjoyed it, though.

**MooseTheScared** · 08-12-2011, 12:38 PM

I still haven't finished it, but have to say that your use of monsters is remarkable. I mean, the maps are not flooded with grunts as it happens in lots of other stories, and it really helps to build the tension and frighten the player. I actually encountered the first monster couple of minutes ago, and my hands are still shaking as I write this, it was terrifying.