A constructive comment on this would be: Nobody will get too interested in a mod which you are making in English because your English skills are bellow satisfactory. Trying to work with anyone else while having such skills is a PAIN in the *** because of the impossible communication between you. You don't have to be a good English speaker, but you certainly must, if you want anyone to get some interest on your project and help you, take care and review as many times as needed whatever you write.
Quote:"You are play as "Jim" in this story , this is an Modern Time CS (Might a Short Mod)"
Today I dreamt the life I could live forever. You only know that when you feel it for you know not what you like until you've experienced it.