[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread

[Echohalls]

Well I have 0 idea,

But I edited the map again...

Spoiler below!

[FlawlessHappiness]

The tree-pillars are a little bit weird though.. try something else.

[TheBlackWall]

Well I have 0 idea,

But I edited the map again...

Spoiler below!

What plain you used for the ground?

[Echohalls]

No planes, i used dirt_floor from cellarbase

[HiImShy]

Hm.. I guys and girls. Im kinda new here (first post ever). This is the first "serious" room I have ever made.
I have only been using the editor for a few days so it's not that good. But what do you think?

[LordOfDragons]

Looks good for your first rooms
This is your first time with the Level Editor?
My frst room had no Light, furnture or billboards.
It looks good for me but lets wait for other guys to reply.

[HiImShy]

Looks good for your first rooms
This is your first time with the Level Editor?
My frst room had no Light, furnture or billboards.
It looks good for me but lets wait for other guys to reply.

Yes it's the first time with the Editor.
But I have been looking through tutorials and the maps from the game.

[7heDubz]

I like the second more then the first, the lighting is rather bland in the first, more intresting in the second.

[HiImShy]

I like the second more then the first, the lighting is rather bland in the first, more intresting in the second.

What can I do to improve it?

Note: It's the same room from different angles.

[7heDubz]

The light in the second looks like it extends further the then in the first... Huh.

The books look copy pasted in.
At school at the moment so not sure if this is helpful at all but mess with the lighting around the windows, point lights point lights point lights.