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[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread
A.M Team Offline
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#2,691
RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Now let's all agree...

To never be creative again...
05-22-2015, 09:18 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Green is not a creative color.
05-22-2015, 09:26 PM
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Neelke Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Made a map which is meant to signify Heaven.

[Image: Dww6P6S.png]

Would love any opinion or improvement that can be made.
Derp.
05-23-2015, 11:57 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

I like the way she's embracing the one dead tree. Poignant.

Could you make your own grass material for the floor - something a bit more lush?
05-24-2015, 03:35 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

What I would add to enhance it a little bit, is a bit of light dust around the angel statue.
it signifies that it's an important object or something unusual.

Spoiler below!
Every women needs to sparkle they say...
(This post was last modified: 05-24-2015, 06:55 AM by Radical Batz.)
05-24-2015, 06:52 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Mr Badcatz: I actually have that, it's impossible to see lol.

MrBehemoth: Yeah I want a better plane that looks like grass but I haven't been able to find one, it's annoying. Is there one in AMFP or some other place you know about?
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05-24-2015, 09:14 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(05-24-2015, 09:14 AM)Neelke Wrote: Mr Badcatz: I actually have that, it's impossible to see lol.

MrBehemoth: Yeah I want a better plane that looks like grass but I haven't been able to find one, it's annoying. Is there one in AMFP or some other place you know about?

Have you tried looking in CGtextures site?
I also found something, if this is what you're looking for..
http://th07.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/20...4u41a9.jpg
http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs11/i/2007/1..._stock.jpg
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

I have an unused one here that I made from scratch. You can have it - no copyright issues. I've put it on the resources thread.
(This post was last modified: 05-24-2015, 10:25 AM by MrBehemoth.)
05-24-2015, 10:24 AM
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LikeABoss97 Offline
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Photo  RE: Screenshot criticism thread

I am currently making a Custom Story/ Full Conversion mod (haven't decided yet). I want to show few pictures of a new area I made..

[Image: WxuFQn.png]

Two more pictures:
Spoiler below!
[Image: vZv1In.png]

[Image: ujh0I1.png]

..sooo.. what do you think?
05-28-2015, 05:55 PM
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Radical Batz Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(05-28-2015, 05:55 PM)LikeABoss97 Wrote: I am currently making a Custom Story/ Full Conversion mod (haven't decided yet). I want to show few pictures of a new area I made..

[Image: WxuFQn.png]

Two more pictures:
Spoiler below!
[Image: vZv1In.png]

[Image: ujh0I1.png]

..sooo.. what do you think?
That looks interesting, the lighting could use a bit more work but overall it looks great.
Where did u get those walls from? Tongue
(This post was last modified: 05-28-2015, 06:02 PM by Radical Batz.)
05-28-2015, 06:02 PM
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