[WIP] Malebranche - Sleep of Madness (Around The World Arts)

[Pr3d4t0r]

Screenshots are looking really great. Much detailed and feels right.
There is something in this screen however, I think you forgot to put a welder to hide the joint point.

As for the story, I think you should give a hint at least; like a teaser.

Thanks for the feedback

In fact, for the screen, I don't map this area. But it's not over yet, so I guess there will be a lot of fixing.

For the story yes, we'll just add a little hint, but not too much. I'm the kind of guy who think that something can get way better with the surprise effect !

But SquigPie (who make the plot) will care about the scenario and what we can tell you.

Anyway, thank you really much for your feedback, and good luck on your mod, wich looks really impressive by the way ! See you

---

those statures are.... in a word... CREEPY... *hides behinD Cry*

I don't think that hiding yourself behind Cry would do much, you would need someone way way heavier.

Cry would just say "Fuck it, were daniel, we've done this shit before". *Grabs a chair and smacks the grunt with it* and runs, leaving you behind! =O

Lol you all made my day :p

For the statues yes, I really find it creepy too, even if I made this area. It's like getting scared by his son in fact xD

[SquigPie]

Screenshots are looking really great. Much detailed and feels right.
There is something in this screen however, I think you forgot to put a welder to hide the joint point.

As for the story, I think you should give a hint at least; like a teaser.

Well, I'm not entirely sure what to say, even the team-members (including myself) get confused over the strange plot I've cooked up. But sure, I'll give you a small teaser:

"A man awakens from dreams dark, to find himself in darker dreams still."

[Deckard]

"A man awakens from dreams dark, to find himself in darker dreams still."

-

Will there be uncertainty/confusion between what is a dream and what is reality? Cause I like that kind of thing.

[Tanshaydar]

Well, I'm not entirely sure what to say, even the team-members (including myself) get confused over the strange plot I've cooked up. But sure, I'll give you a small teaser:

"A man awakens from dreams dark, to find himself in darker dreams still."

Thanks but it is still very ambiguous. For example, mine was: "What if one day, you wake up as a patient, without any memory of yourself? What are you going to believe? Or... Who are you going to believe?..." and my story evolves exactly around this phrase. Your phrase is still too vague to understand, or it could be just me

[Pr3d4t0r]

In fact it could be :

"You has been a very bad boy. So the Evil is playing with you, moving you around floors and states of your mind. But you are going to have a big surprise... and you will have to save your life."

Sorry, I'm not working on the plot xD

[Tanshaydar]

If that's the case, it is intriguing and telling a bit about the story.

[Pr3d4t0r]

If that's the case, it is intriguing and telling a bit about the story.

As I said, we don't really want to spoil about the story very much. I know that a good story can gives the player the envy to play the mod, but I will let this to SquigPie

[SquigPie]

The voice told you that there would be dark dreams and the gnashing of teeth, it told of revolution against what it saw as opressors, it told you of liberation through torment, to set oneself free by cutting off one's own hand. Of a giant encassed in ice, of daemons splitting damned souls with swords and of a tailed king set to judge. It told you, that what freedom dreams grant to the damned they take from the innocent. For so is the nature of a dream, to grant one freedom in the ignorance of slavery.

There, it doesn't explain much, but it sounded cool, and it's the sort of writing you can expect (although it heavily depends on the character speaking) from this mod.

[Tanshaydar]

Now it sounds better and more clear. Thanks

[Pr3d4t0r]

Now it sounds better and more clear. Thanks

Irony ? Looool :p