[WIP] Project Amnesia

[WALP]

"The year is 1826, and William Salomon, a man from Great Brittan, has just arrived in Castle Greenborogh after receiving a letter that claimed that he had inherrited the castle. After a while he realises that something is wrong with the castle."

Dosent sound interesting enough(at all) in my opinion, its sounds like its just an excuse to how the player got there, which is being very disrespectful to story.
It might be that you have some great and interesting story planned, but those 2 sentences makes it sound like any other custom story, and im guessing...no I expect you to go beyond that if you wish graduate on this.

Lastly Good luck.