Aftermath

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"Aftermath" strong name for story but weak itself.
It really doesn't ring a bell.
"Random custom story w/ teleporting naked guyz and cheap jumpscares. part 100." would have made more sense.
I know that you're a newbie and you want to share your creations but don't copy the worst. This genre have been bored us almost to death.


I see potential on you and i've seen much worse stories, but you need to practice more, and come with better ideas, before posting something like this in the forum.