Aftermath

[DCJK61]

This is my first small custom story

Aftermath:

You are in the dungeon
he.. It.. killed your sister....
You are going to avenge your sister...








download:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/9mxk0sokgcs44tk/Aftermath.rar


Enjoy!

[WALP]

pictures, describtion, looking just a little proffessional.

that is all

[WALP]

did you remember to use boxlights?

[DCJK61]

did you remember to use boxlights?

i forgot to add them D:

[Slanderous]

did you remember to use boxlights?

i forgot to add them D:

Well... shit.

[DCJK61]

did you remember to use boxlights?

i forgot to add them D:

Well... shit.

They are not realy important

[HumiliatioN]

did you remember to use boxlights?

i forgot to add them D:

Well... shit.

They are not realy important

mm.. Wrong. Yes they are, one of the most important lights in HPL editor because if you don't have any boxlights added it's pitch black darkness and really annoying to play because you can't see shit then, even if you add pointlights or one option you have to add those really many to lighten up and make it visible to see on walls and all that stuff, what you want to explore.

[Red]

"Aftermath" strong name for story but weak itself.
It really doesn't ring a bell.
"Random custom story w/ teleporting naked guyz and cheap jumpscares. part 100." would have made more sense.
I know that you're a newbie and you want to share your creations but don't copy the worst. This genre have been bored us almost to death.


I see potential on you and i've seen much worse stories, but you need to practice more, and come with better ideas, before posting something like this in the forum.

[DCJK61]

did you remember to use boxlights?

i forgot to add them D:

Well... shit.

They are not realy important

mm.. Wrong. Yes they are, one of the most important lights in HPL editor because if you don't have any boxlights added it's pitch black darkness and really annoying to play because you can't see shit then, even if you add pointlights or one option you have to add those really many to lighten up and make it visible to see on walls and all that stuff, what you want to explore.

Yeah but in Aftermath is enough light


Yeah but in this custom story is enough light

---

"Aftermath" strong name for story but weak itself.
It really doesn't ring a bell.
"Random custom story w/ teleporting naked guyz and cheap jumpscares. part 100." would have made more sense.
I know that you're a newbie and you want to share your creations but don't copy the worst. This genre have been bored us almost to death.



I see potential on you and i've seen much worse stories, but you need to practice more, and come with better ideas, before posting something like this in the forum.

I made this custom story just 4 fun in 6 days


And i didnt copy anithing!

[Red]

i forgot to add them D:

Well... shit.

They are not realy important

mm.. Wrong. Yes they are, one of the most important lights in HPL editor because if you don't have any boxlights added it's pitch black darkness and really annoying to play because you can't see shit then, even if you add pointlights or one option you have to add those really many to lighten up and make it visible to see on walls and all that stuff, what you want to explore.

Yeah but in Aftermath is enough light


Yeah but in this custom story is enough light

---

"Aftermath" strong name for story but weak itself.
It really doesn't ring a bell.
"Random custom story w/ teleporting naked guyz and cheap jumpscares. part 100." would have made more sense.
I know that you're a newbie and you want to share your creations but don't copy the worst. This genre have been bored us almost to death.



I see potential on you and i've seen much worse stories, but you need to practice more, and come with better ideas, before posting something like this in the forum.

I made this custom story just 4 fun in 6 days


And i didnt copy anithing!

If you make these for fun, don't paste them here, i don't think people
find this story "fun". This side of the forum is more serious. Paste them
in somewhere else like pewdiepie forum or something.