Need someone to test run, also looking for scripter and story maker!

[Koopa Rs07]

Hello, this is my very first custom story and I decided I needed some help with it. The story is very basic right now so if you think you can make the story line better please tell me. I'm decently new to making custom stories and I'm not the best scripter, so if anyone can email me, steam chat me, or oovoo call me, then do so. I want to bring my custom story to life!

The custom story name is "Metus".The basic story line is you wake up not knowing who you are, as you go on you find out you're somewhere under Greenland. The year is in the 2000s. Yes, yes, I know it kinda sounds like Penumbra, then again, if you feel like you can make a better story contact me.

I have lots of Penumbra models in my custom story so the file size is pretty big, but when I'm finished with at least the demo it'll be a lot smaller, because I will have known which models are used.

Here are some pictures of my custom story!






Here is the download for my custom story, keep in mind this isn't an official demo.

Metus