Need someone to test run, also looking for scripter and story maker!

[A.M Team]

Hello! I am happy to see another custom story out in the open. It may be a demo but I'll give it a test run.

Heres how I got on:

Positives:

- You nailed the athmosphere in the green fog room outside the artic level. I

really was dreading every cornor I came across in fear of a Brute

- Your mapping is really good for a beginner. I really liked the mansion level

with the big shandeler

Negetives:

- The first encounter with the grunt was frustrating and poorly built up. You

need to show that there is a hiding place in the small room. Maybe open the

door a bit?

- The second grunt was not scary at all, you need to do more than spawn him

right behind the player

- I semi rage quitted in the artic level. It was way too bright and if this is

a serious CS the peinguin remark will break ANY emersion in the game

Verdict:
A good start with the CS, just make sure you do two things:

* Build up your monsters

* Make the artic level more visible

Other than that, this should be a good CS. Keep it up!