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Familia Hernandez (My First map) (Demo) [Fixed]
Khyrpa Offline
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RE: My First Custom story [WIP]

All right! I played trough it and I gotta say it has all the healthy problems of a test/first map.
There was no story, you start next to emptiness, there's only 2 "scares" and atmosphere lacks! Those all will improve when you play more with the editor ofc. Also you're scripting looked weird, but in a good way and it shows you should be able to actually do what you want with it.

Few things that could possibly help you:

Add more stuff! Meaning script some random sounds around the place and fill all corners with as much ornaments, storage, container entities (don't forget decals!).

change the tile amount on your floors. If you keep them at 1 the wooden planks look unnaturally small.

Check all lights leaking into unwanted places, and use point/spot lights to assist your light entities to cover wider area with light (also your box light dsnt cover the whole map)

Try to create an idea/plot around your story what you can use to evoke emotions and tension on players.

mulle saa avautua ja kysellä jos tulee onkelmia tai muuta vastaan pm: llä!
06-19-2011, 01:42 AM
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RE: My First Custom story [WIP] - by Khyrpa - 06-19-2011, 01:42 AM
RE: My First Custom story [WIP] - by TheKataKombs - 06-19-2011, 12:11 PM
RE: My First Custom story [WIP] - by Rownbear - 06-19-2011, 02:11 PM
RE: My First Custom story [WIP] - by Rouvis - 06-19-2011, 06:24 PM
RE: My First Custom story [WIP] - by Dark Knight - 06-19-2011, 08:38 PM
RE: My First Custom story [WIP] - by HumiliatioN - 06-19-2011, 10:57 PM
RE: My First Custom story [WIP] - by Rouvis - 06-21-2011, 05:37 PM



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