Fan-made Amnesia Sequel

**LuckyBlackCatXIII** · 10-07-2011, 06:04 PM

(10-07-2011, 03:50 PM)Fomzo Wrote: I like you
Yes I have someone proofreading my stories, just look at Post #3.
I enjoy doing this and take it quite seriously so if any of you has suggestions I'll be glad to know.
GLAD YOU LIKED IT!
THIS IS JUST THE BEGINNING!

Ha ha, thank you! And pff how the Hell did I miss that? M'bad! But I'll be sure to make any suggestions should I think up any!

**Fomzo** · 10-21-2011, 10:06 PM

Chapter 5 coming tomorrow.
You should be getting fresh ones weekly but I'm a very busy man and sometimes just can't keep up with everything. Mind that writing a substantial story takes time and I don't want to mess it up out of hurry Big Grin

So please, bear with me guys Sad

**Gasjockey** · 10-22-2011, 08:38 PM

OK, so I thought I'd introduce myself here as well.

I'm Gasjockey, and if you weren't aware, I proofread Fomzo's brilliant stories. Now, this has both upsides and downsides. Of course, this means that (hopefully) the final product that you will read is more thorough, as it's been through a process of recursive revising, handed back and forth to increase quality and make sure that it's free for plotholes and spelling/grammatic errors. The negative side of this, is the fact that it's reliant on it fitting into both Fomzo's and my own schedule. We are both very busy men, and as such, this will cause much longer delays then would have been the case had it just been him.

Just to let you guys know, I am currently working on proofing his two latest stories, the first to be finished hopefully tonight, the next tomorrow.

[PS] (the latest two are really awesome :P)

**Fomzo** · 10-22-2011, 08:43 PM

Oh come on... Big Grin

You are too modest about yourself Tongue

**Gasjockey** · 10-22-2011, 09:43 PM

(10-22-2011, 08:43 PM)Fomzo Wrote: Oh come on... You are too modest about yourself

I don't think I'm alone about that Tongue

**LuckyBlackCatXIII** · 10-23-2011, 05:29 PM

Can't wait to see the next parts then! Don't push yourselves too much over it though, just take your time and we'll be happy when things get updated! Good luck you two!

**hawgdriver** · 10-29-2011, 09:07 PM

Very enjoyable!

**Gasjockey** · 10-30-2011, 12:18 AM

Some very important (school)work has come up. This has forced me to take a break from proofing this story, and I don't know when I'll be able to resume work per usual (hopefully within a week though). This is not on Fomzo's end, but on mine, and I'm terribly sorry. Sad

**Kein** · 10-30-2011, 11:45 AM

Oh, it's a fanfic?
I thought it was the script and concept design for the possible game...

**Fomzo** · 10-30-2011, 06:10 PM

(10-30-2011, 11:45 AM)Kein Wrote: Oh, it's a fanfic?
I thought it was the script and concept design for the possible game...

HAHAHAHA Thank you!
But maybe...who knows? Big Grin

It depends on how FG guys like it.
Happy Halloween by the way!