Work in progress Amnesia: Twister of Deceit (title can change)

**Hardarm** · 11-08-2011, 09:07 PM

So, guys. I'm really dissapointed on the project I tried to set up, it was really too hard for me. I'll start up with something simple now: Story, they drawn you in your own blood, you've been imprisoned, you lost your memory, you have to get out. Pretty simple huh? Tongue

Here are some screenshots to the map i've started, still they look intriguing ;D

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/35955357/TOD01.jpg

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/35955357/TOD02.jpg

And the last one, my favourite:

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/35955357/TOD03.jpg

**Arvuti** · 11-08-2011, 10:04 PM

Mapping definetly looks interesting. I'll keep my eye on this.

Also wow, that's a lot of smoke on the second picture. Tone it down a bit perhaps ?

**Hardarm** · 11-08-2011, 10:31 PM

Ok I will. It's just there was way too steam because it was coming out for years in a closed room Wink

**Khyrpa** · 11-08-2011, 10:54 PM

Nice fps!

You could tone down the color of the fogs IMO and instead of white fog, you could have fog that shows how the dust shines with the color from the lamps -> brownish. (Or just decrease the alpha).

Your favourite one looks good, even with the bad picture quality Smile

**Hardarm** · 11-08-2011, 11:25 PM

Yeah it's because of xfire ^^

Thank you all...

**Kman** · 11-09-2011, 12:49 AM

those are some very interesting looking screens... i'll keep my eye on this one Smile

**Giovanni Rosa** · 11-10-2011, 11:08 PM

Looks impressingly interesting. Can't wait!

**Hardarm** · 11-10-2011, 11:30 PM

Grazie, adesso sto lavorando ad un puzzle però non so come mandarlo avanti O.o

**JenniferOrange** · 11-11-2011, 01:24 AM

The environments I'm really liking. Though if I can give constructive criticism, I'd say add more objects to that first screen shot area. There's nothing I dislike more than a huge, empty area! Also the idea you have seems to be repeating throughout this forum. Hopefully you've come up with some twists so we don't have to keep replaying the same storyline made by different people! In my opinion you have a way with environments. Use them to your advantage. Smile

**Hardarm** · 11-11-2011, 06:56 PM

I will be adding details and scenery, dude, more than almost any author will be, in fact explain why 4 rooms = 2 MB? and the map is still 30%

And then, how much objects would you have in a cell room closed for 20 years? ...

Thanks for the criticism, though. But almost all cell rooms will be like that Wink

I cant even explain why it has got anything, or I will spoil what is going to happen Smile

And the story will have something more Wink