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RE: Screenshot criticism thread
Pretty nice so far, but you'll need to work a bit more on the lighting. There are a lot of unnatural shadows around the torch. Place a pointlight and a boxlight lighten the room up.
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06-19-2013, 05:09 PM |
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Wapez
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread
Unnatural shadows? Explain please.
Of course I'm already using a pointlight, boxlight and spotlight.
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06-19-2013, 05:14 PM |
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FlawlessHappiness
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread
The torch on the picture is a torch surrounded by a ball of light. This is not how light works in the real world.
The light will light up more of the room, but fade more and more until it's black.
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06-19-2013, 05:31 PM |
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OriginalUsername
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread
(06-19-2013, 05:14 PM)Wapez Wrote: Unnatural shadows? Explain please.
Of course I'm already using a pointlight, boxlight and spotlight.
The dark shadows. A light doesn't just stop somewhere in mid air. It goes on till it reaches a wall. I'm talking about the pure dark spots on the left and right of the screen
Edit: BeeKayK ninja'd me. But yeah, that's what I meant
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06-19-2013, 05:31 PM |
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Kullin
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread
So I made a entrence hall (The door is behind the pillars!) and I need your opinions on the lightning!
(sorry if my enlish is bad!)
(This post was last modified: 06-20-2013, 12:24 PM by Kullin.)
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PutraenusAlivius
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread
The billboard's color is too strong. It must be faint. Add some light dust. Again, it must be faint.
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06-20-2013, 12:27 PM |
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Kullin
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread
(06-20-2013, 12:27 PM)JustAnotherPlayer Wrote: The billboard's color is too strong. It must be faint. Add some light dust. Again, it must be faint. I have light dust! But thank you I will fix the billboard's right away!
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06-20-2013, 12:30 PM |
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OriginalUsername
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread
It's also pretty dark.. You should add more point- and spotlights.
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06-20-2013, 12:30 PM |
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Kullin
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread
(06-20-2013, 12:30 PM)Smoke Wrote: It's also pretty dark.. You should add more point- and spotlights. Yes sir!
Edit: The problem is that I allways have a hard time using pointlights! :p
(This post was last modified: 06-20-2013, 12:32 PM by Kullin.)
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FlawlessHappiness
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread
(06-20-2013, 12:30 PM)Kullin Wrote: (06-20-2013, 12:30 PM)Smoke Wrote: It's also pretty dark.. You should add more point- and spotlights. Yes sir!
Edit: The problem is that I allways have a hard time using pointlights! :p
Then learn it! Use them more often, if they're hard to use! The more you use them, the more you'll get used to the way they work, and how you're supposed to use them
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